March Madness Check In Day 16--I Spy
First let me start off with today's winner:
Misha Gericke
Go to this post to pick out your prize http://denisejaden.blogspot.ca/2013/03/march-madness-is-here-wipmadness.html
And then email Denise your choice at d(at)denisejaden(dot)com and she'll get it to you.
Last Summer I was lucky enough to be able to attend ALA as it was held in Anaheim, California. I live about 30 minutes away so I didn't have any excuse. I went.
One galley I picked up, A YEAR OF WRITING DANGEROUSLY by Barbara Abercrombie, sounded intriguing as it's a collection of quotes, lessons, prompts from a UCLA Extension Writing teacher. Today I thought I'd share one of her prompts with everyone.
52. The Writer as Spy.
The great advantage of being a writer is that you can spy on people. You're there, listening to every word, but part of you is observing. Everything is useful to a writer, you see-every scrap, even the longest and most boring of luncheon parties...
Graham Greene
I admit it. I love to eavesdrop on conversations.
I don't go to this extreme. Or even do this:
I love to listen to other conversations while at Starbucks, Panera, the library, and even at my son's satellite school which include high schoolers.
Once at dinner, we were seated next to a bilingual couple and their teen. Of course, I was listening. My husband knew what I was doing and later asked what they were discussing. Since I'm fluent in Spanish, I got the overall jist of their conversation. Plus, I picked up some great dialogue for my own writing. Not only that but I picked up on the mannerisms and body language too.
I admit I sometimes feel like this:
Or I might just 'ask'. I've done this a few times while I sat in satellite school's study hall which happened to be filled with teens. What they shared shocked me at times but overall helped me see things through their eyes. **And yes, they love e-books and no FB isn't all that!
My question today is do you do your own I Spying to help with your writing? Can you share any interesting discussions you might have picked up on?
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Playing I Spy. I do it everywhere (I spy, that is!). It drives my family nuts, especially when we're out to dinner, and I lean over or twist my head just enough so I can listen in on others' conversations. I jot down words or phrases I overhear. One of my favorite phrases I've heard was a few years back in west Texas, in a tiny town called Marfa. A female innkeeper was talking to another guest at the counter when she spilled her drink. She hollered out, "Oh, pookey, dookie!" I swear, one day, I'll use that phrase in a story. I've also been known to take quick pics of people or their clothing with my phone's camera. My girls tease me about being "creepy". Hey, a writer has to do what a writer has to do, right?
Hope everyone is getting a lot accomplished this month. I have to admit, I've slacked in the past week, but for reasons I won't bore you with today. I whined about it on Denise's blog already!
Have a super great weekend! Wip on, peeps!
I'm hoping to get tons and tons of writing done this weekend, if I manage to finish my taxes. Boo taxes!
Now I must get rolling on these revisions. Took the day off yesterday and need to make up for that.
Stay calm and carry on, Wipsters!
It drives my family nuts too! Husband will lean over more than a few times whenever we're out someplace and ask me what the discussion was all about. While waiting for a movie to start, I once heard this young mother say, "Oh, snap," as she was pulling along two young children. The way she said it had me thinking, "I got to use that line!'
Hope you get out of your writing funk. I so know about those. I'm sending some writing fairy dust your way.
Ooh, one of the perks of being a teacher has to be picking up on not only dialogue but mannerisms of teens. I homeschool my tween son through a charter school. This means I'm able to go to his satellite school twice a week. There's K-12th grade there. Last year I was able to go to the teen's study hall. It was so fascinating to observe and take notes. They caught on to me though! What happened next was a very lively discussion on what they thought about certain issues.
Thanks for posting!
I need one of those shirts! Husband tells me, more than a few times, "Now is that really nice?" Uh, yeah?
I love to sit back after church services and observe people. Body language is so fascinating!
Thanks for stopping by! You're always so supportive!
You go, chica! Yay, on getting lots of writing done this weekend. My husband and son are at an overnight scouting camp which means I finally have time to WRITE! Yay!
And I know the feeling on taxes. Have to do those too. Double boo.
Thanks for stopping by!
I've been working on FAST FICTION--mostly reformatting for my publisher. Kind of mundane and time-consuming work, but it's all good. I'm looking forward to getting back to my WIP as soon as this is done.
This was also a Writer Question of the Day (#WQOTD) to which I replied, "All the time." You never know what these little snippets of gold might offer you for a character or theme for a scene.
While waiting for my sister at the mall a few weeks ago, I was typing away and I heard the tension of an argument. My eyes slid up from my screen and there was a young Korean couple arguing. Body language alone told me that the guy did something majorly wrong. She'd keep stalking off and he'd pull her back, their performance right there in front of me. At one point, he'd flopped down beside me on the bench. But my eyes followed the the platform boots stomping towards the exit. It took the guy a few seconds to realize what happened before going after her.
Only regret? I don't understand Korean. But the entire scene was universal--guys are dogs. Ahem, I mean, raw emotions transcend linguistic boundaries.
Also, I wanted to mention something that I forgot in yesterday's comments (twice, it seems). I'm thankful that I've never been jealous of other writers and their laurels. They have as much right to have their day as I do. In fact, put me right on top of the pyramid. I'll cheer for them. It's never been, "Wow, their idea was awesome. I'm doomed and I hate them." Rather, every time I read a blurb or review of someone's book I marvel at the limitless endeavors of human creativity. It makes me proud to be a writer in this era.
Didn't see a soapbox anywhere, but I just wanted to share the love.
Have a great weekend--stay away from the Shamrock Shakes. They don't taste the way they used to. ;-) And, no. For those unfamiliar, it's not a dance craze, it's a drink. (On that note, Alabama Shakes? Also not a dance craze.)
Cheers,
Tonette
I definitely keep my eyes and ears peeled for anything that might interest me as a writer. There's actually a lot to be learnt just by paying attention.
Checking in: Read 11 chapters today and wrote 1652 words today, bringing this week's word count to 10156. Which now puts me four days ahead. If I manage to maintain this writing pace, I'll come in closer to 40k this month. ^_^
Ooh, mall and teens. I've stolen some of the best dialogue from these encounters!
Good luck on your non-fiction project. And congrats again!
Congrats! And wow, chica, you're cruising with your writing! You're also motivating me to get back to my revision!
Naps are good. I usually take one of Sunday after church services. Then I'm 'refreshed' to start attacking my projects again.
Thanks for posting!
Too funny. I remember as a child using the glass technique to listen in on adult conversations especially whenever my mother's dad showed up as he had all the latest gossip.
Thanks for posting!
Ooh, isn't it interesting that body language is universal? I've overheard my fair share of similar arguments. I'm fluent in Spanish and have an ear for different languages. Still there's those I don't understand but like you said, I check out the body language.
I admit sometimes I do get down when I hear someone gets that huge deal but like you I realize it's better to laud their success. Also I love to cheer them on. It helps me to not think of myself which can get very depressing. I had one author friend tell me once, that she was a 10+ year overnight succeed. I think we sometimes forget that almost all those who get those deals had to work for it. And yes, they do deserve lauds.
Thanks for dropping by and posting!
I don't do a lot of intentional spying, although I do spy by accident at times, lol. (My subconscious is being a writer, even when I don't realize it.) That said, I think I could benefit from more covert ops. *dons invisibility cloak*
It's a mad, mad day around here. Tons to do, but writing is on the list. There shall be words! Good luck with the Madness, everyone! :)
I can't believe we're halfway though the month! I've already met my goal for the weekend, and set a new one since that one obviously wasn't as hard to meet as I thought it'd be. Just keep moving forward, right?
The other day at the ice cream parlor, I was listening to this one guy talking about his interaction with a homeless man in San Francisco. The guy was a little surprised when the man turned down his offer of his leftovers from breakfast because it had meat. I wish I had written down how he told it, because it would make a great scene.
I find spying helps a lot with dialogue and to a certain extent, voice.
Off to write for a few hours in between loads of laundry.
Thanks! Ooh, I would have loved to hear that one conversation!
Yes, I was able to tackle three revision chapters. It's great having a day to yourself!
Thanks for commenting!
When I was a teen and even when I was in college, I used to love to eavesdrop on conversations only to caught the latest gossip. My favorite thing to do while in college had to be sitting on the bench and just observing people.
Yay on making your goal! And thanks for being a part of this!
Mad, mad day here too. Husband and son just got back and I got an earful of the latest drama. Sunscreen bottle burst all over my 'nice' backpack; son 'decided' to go after frogs and I found out this waterproof stuff isn't all that; water mattress leaked, and other stuff. And they say girls are drama queens.
Thanks for posting!
That's okay. I usually post before I go to bed so you guys on the East coast can see my post in time for the actual day!
Yay, on maybe breaking through that writing funk! Remember, we're here to cheer you on!
Today was a bit of a letdown. I only got about 1000 words down. I'm going to try to write some more after I crawl into bed but I'm just not feeling it.
I totally love to people watch and like you I feel it's an important part of writing.
Now on the writing:
Think of it this way. You wrote 1000 words. That's better than 0. **And better than I did today. I ended up deleting more than writing and my grand sum was a couple hundred words.
Thanks for posting!
Welcome to the club of eavesdroppers! I think I've always loved to listen in on conversations or at least check out body language. My favorites places right now have to include son's satellite school during lunch and also observing people after church services.
Thanks for posting!